With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. University should provide digital material rather than textbooks. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view.

In
this
tech-savvy era,
role
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the role
of libraries has come to halt because every bit of information is available online on the digital media. Universities are
also
replacing their resources into online forms. Here I will discuss both ebb and flows of
this
point in forthcoming paragraphs before reaching to plausible conclusion.
To begin
with the benefits, undoubtedly online digital media has
myriad
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a myriad
myriads
of advantages.
First
of all it is portable, person has not need to carry
bundle
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bundles
of books because every needed source is available in small devices so
person
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people
a person
can access information everywhere. A study conducted by
American federation
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the American federation
stated that study expenditures have decreased from when people have started to using more online resources.
Furthermore
, it is eco- friendly, a nation can save
lot
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lots
of trees, through which we have to chop to making paper
,
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,
we can avoid deforestation On the other side of
coin
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the coin
, it has some flaws as well.
Firstly with
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Firstly, with
the increasing use of internet, electromagnetic waves are increasing which are dangerous for instinct species and it is
also
detrimental to whole diversity.
Secondly
, whenever the internet server is slow
down
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down, then
then
again good old books come to rescue us. In the
capsulation
the comfort you feel when consoled in times of disappointment
consolation
, digital media is more superior as compared to libraries so libraries should be
updated but
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updated, but
books
also
should not be ignored totally because old is every time gold.
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