With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. University should provide digital material rather than textbooks. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view.

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tech-savvy era,

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the role

of libraries has come to halt because every bit of information is available online on the digital media. Universities are

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replacing their resources into online forms. Here I will discuss both ebb and flows of

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point in forthcoming paragraphs before reaching to plausible conclusion.

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with the benefits, undoubtedly online digital media has

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a myriad

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of advantages.

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of all it is portable, person has not need to carry

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bundles

of books because every needed source is available in small devices so

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people

a person

can access information everywhere. A study conducted by

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the American federation

stated that study expenditures have decreased from when people have started to using more online resources.

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, it is eco- friendly, a nation can save

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of trees, through which we have to chop to making paper

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we can avoid deforestation On the other side of

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, it has some flaws as well.

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Firstly, with

the increasing use of internet, electromagnetic waves are increasing which are dangerous for instinct species and it is

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detrimental to whole diversity.

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, whenever the internet server is slow

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down, then

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again good old books come to rescue us. In the

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the comfort you feel when consoled in times of disappointment

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, digital media is more superior as compared to libraries so libraries should be

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updated, but

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should not be ignored totally because old is every time gold.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Fully explain your ideas

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.