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The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Admittedly, pursuing
job
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a job
 from
home
 has become much easier with
internet
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the internet
.
Although
 some people believe working from has
negative effect
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a negative effect
 on
work
 efficiency.
while
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While
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 say
this
 trend is fruitful.
However I
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However, I
 believe disadvantages of
this
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outright
outweighs
 advantages. On the one hand
,
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,
working from
home
 has many benefits for the people who has to stay
home
 with any particular reason.It benefits both employee and employer.People get
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
 to
work
 according to their convenience with flexible timings and do their household chores without any hazards
.
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.
And above all
this
 trend save money and time which takes to commute to
workplace
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the workplace
 can be used in more productive activity.
On the other hand
,
this
 has certain demerits which can't be ignored.
Firstly
,
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,
A
person
 who stays at
home
 day and
night has
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night, has
 more chances to perceive mental illness making him/ her less efficient to
work
.
Secondly
, if a
person
 works alone at
home
 so chances of promotion become less due to less exposure to
work
 ethics. Adding to it, a
person
 can
ending
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end
 up into in balance between professional life and personal life as there is no rigid line between household chores and the working time.
For
example my
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example, my
 friend
,
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,
Rahul is
an
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a
 freelancer who works from
home
 and he has some International
silents
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Silents
 who calls him In the Midnight so Rahul has to miss sound sleep and in
day
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the day
 he has to take care of his small children so he is not able to find
right time
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the right time
a right time
 to sleep
consequently
, Rahul has become anxious and restless
person
. In conclusion,
although
 the working from
home
 has few merits, in my opinion disadvantages of
this
 trend outweigh advantages
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