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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, crime, detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

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Most probably the greatest invention of
past couple
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the past couple
 of centuries is
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computer
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computed
 which is serving as a kind of personal assistant for
majority
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the majority
 of us, as well as playing
pivotal role
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a pivotal role
 in running all sorts of official purposes, ranging from
minstry
the prevailing current of thought
mainstream
 to research academies.
This
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 essay predicts about probable upcoming applications of
Use synonyms
computer
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computing
,
also
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 presents a comparison of positives and negatives of relying on
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 device. If I had to assume that what
more
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more computations
computer
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 can offer for
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next decade
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the next decade
 or century, I would say that all potentials of
computer
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 have already been discovered, we only can expect to have access to amazing applications which are still not
comnon
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
coming
 to serve individual's purposes.
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, we are using computers to diagnose diseases, predicting weather and creating better artificial intelligence, but commoners can't enjoy these luxury in daily life. May be future will make things easier for us by allowing wider access. Some people find it ominous that we are consumed by
Use synonyms
computer
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computers
the computer
. They fear that in
long run
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the long run
 it will degrade our natural
lifeskills
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life skills
 which we
aquired
gotten through environmental forces
acquired
 over thousands of years of civilization. Another dreadful worry is the consequences if
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computer
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the computer
a computer
 fails us someday. According to them, we might lead
this
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 world toward a jeopardy by practicing getting things done with
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computer
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a computer
 and giving up manual skills. Despite
this
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 horrifying vices,
computer
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's positives are countless and so wide that the vices it creates make only a minuscule of its vast effects. Civilization began its ascent thousands of years back, but gained momentum in
true sense
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the true sense
 after the invention of
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computer
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the computer
. Now we are connected through internet, we can communicate and commute at a great speed as we had never before, and
most significantly
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more significantly
, we can think
at
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on
 a global scale.For
examole
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, the world is fighting with global warming together, and
computer
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 made it possible by connecting the world leaders and providing sufficient data and other aids.
Computer
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 and technology made it possible to fight with fatal diseases, conquer the space.
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, it keeps us entertained,
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 improves us in many ways, both directly and indirectly. In fine,
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computer
Suggestion
the computer
 is a blessing, and even all the negatives
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 can think about
computer
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 hypothetically do not make a match for a single benefit of it. We should embrace the
advatages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
,
also
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 be prepared to overcome the threats.
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