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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places

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Now a days most tourists are visiting the places like Sahara desert or the Antarctic and many other places where conditions are difficult. Now we talk about
advantages
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the advantages
 and disadvantages of these places.
First
 of all, there are many advantages to
visit
 those places where the conditions are difficult. The people who
visit
 these places become strong physically and mentally. They can handle the situations easily. While, They can get the knowledge about the world
to
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by
 visiting the deserts and mountains. They get knowledge about those persons who who sacrifices their lives to visiting these places.
Moreover
, Sometimes the person
get
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gets
 something to these places.
For instance
, Once the person got a diamond he thought that its a
pebble but
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pebble, but
 when he went back to home
then
 he came to know that its a pebble.
On the other hand
, The disadvantages are far higher than advantages. Most of people
do not succeeded
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do not succeed
 in these places because they
can not
can not
cannot
 handle the atmosphere. The mountains are
bit
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a bit
 colder than the normal places so it is hard to live there. Whilst, there
are
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is
alot
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a lot
 of dust in deserts so people do not afford the atmosphere of these places. Many tourists
sacrifices
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sacrifice
 their life during visiting these places over the year. Sometimes people forget their tent at night and the poisoned snake eaten him in one byte.
Its
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It's
 hard to survive in these places for those who are not brave. I
totaly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
totally
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
believes
 that the people who are physically and mentally strong should
visit
 these places and others should avoid to
visit
 these places.

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