It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
There is no doubt that these days, the
technology
is an importent
part in our daily lives because help us in many duties every day. The question is, how much the of great significance or value
important
technology
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affected
effected
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this
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is developed. To a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
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illustrate
Furthermore
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Secondly
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