It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There is no doubt that these days, the
technology
is an
importent
of great significance or value
important
part in our daily lives because help us in many duties every day. The question is, how much the
technology
affacted
acted upon; influenced
affected
effected
on our lifestyle and our cultures
?.
Accept space
?.
In
this
essay I am going to explain my view and draw my
pesonal
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
conclusion. In terms of advantages, the
technology
makes our lives
more easier
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easier
because we can do and learn
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
by technical thing
.
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.
For example
, now days we can
communication
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communicate
with people in
difference place
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different places
different place
a different place
in the world by
chat
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chatting
on many
website
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websites
.
Also
, the
trnsportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is developed. To
illustrat
clarify by giving an example of
illustrate
, now days we have a lot of ways to travel between the cities in lesser hours than the past.
Furthermore
, the development in our community day by day, make people don'
t
have many
responsibility
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responsibilities
because they
are depend
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depend
ontechnical
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on technical
life.
How ever
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However
, we couldn'
t
say the traditional cultures aren'
t
impact
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impacted
by these
develop
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developments
developers
, but many
community
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communities
still
maintains
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maintain
on their traditional life.
Firstly
, many families still meeting other and eating food
togather
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to gather
without them
cellphons
a hand-held mobile radiotelephone for use in an area divided into small sections, each with its own short-range transmitter/receiver
cellphones
,
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,
they gives
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
for them.
Secondly
, some parent's rearing their children as their parents reared them until now days. In another word, many
taditional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
additional
skills passed on to children by parents or elders. So, most of
countries
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the countries
still
supports
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support
their cultures and don'
t
allowed to
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
to remove it. In conclusion, a lot of traditional ways of life is
losted
no longer in your possession or control; unable to be found or recovered
lost
listed
as
resulte
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a result
result
the result
results
rest
of
develop
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the development
development
of
technology
, but other societies have survived and even
sucsseed
attain success or reach a desired goal
succeeds
to be better.
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