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Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?

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Arts
Suggestion
The arts
 have little or no place in the educational
curriculum
 so far because we have a feeling that
time
Suggestion
the time
 spent on these things is time wasted. Recent studies,
however
, have shown that a good
curriculum
 that includes arts education can have multiple benefits which I shall highlight in
this
 essay. The most important benefit of
arts
Suggestion
the arts
 in schools is that it contributes to making a well rounded student. Not only that, certain forms of arts instruction enhance and complement academic skills
such
 as basic reading skills, language development and writing skills. So, children do well in other subjects
also
. Another big advantage is that it encourages the pursuit of extra-curricular activities. Children get a chance to show their creative expression. When
such
 hidden abilities are exposed in school time
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 those with exceptional talent can be encouraged to adopt it as a profession later-on in life. It is a well known fact that people in
such
 professions are earning telephone figure salaries nowadays.
Last
 but not least,
such
 subjects are stress-busters. In the highly competitive era of today, pressure of academic subjects is too high. Arts like music, drama and creative writing break the monotony of tough academic studies. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
 that our educational
curriculum
 needs a serious revision and more of
such
 subjects need to be added to the school
curriculum
. They complement academic study, bring out
hidden talent
Suggestion
hidden talents
 and break the ennui of tough academic studies.

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