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Many people believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get places? What are advantages and disadvantages of using bicycle these days?

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Many people believe that riding a
bicycle
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 is the best way to get places? What are advantages and disadvantages of using
bicycle
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 these days? Many people believe that
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bicycle
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bicycling
 is a good option to visit different places. There are enormous benefits to use cycle as a medium of transportation
such
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 as
clean environment
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a clean environment
,
however
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, it’s a
time
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-consuming activity as people don’t have enough
time
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 to spend in slow source of travelling.
This
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 essay discusses both pros and cons. Undoubtedly, air without carbon dioxide from
fossils
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fossil
 fuels is a dream of any person because its ratio has been increased dangerously in the air. The main source to contaminate the atmosphere is vehicles. If bicycles will be used to travel, it’ll surely be proved as an effective step to the vision of fresh air. Many countries are encouraging in replacing the use of cars with the latest models of cycle to prevent the environment from emission of vehicles.
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, in china bicycles are available outside every building and anyone can ride to reach their destination Free of Cost.
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, there are some cons associated with
this
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 option
such
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 as shortage of
time
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. Everyone is so busy with their daily commitments, so they prefer to
safe
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
 as much
time
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 as possible.
This
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 attitude of people added too much automation in their life in
form
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the form
 of automatic vehicles, laptops and machines etc. To save the
time
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 they often give preference to trains and cars over the mechanical mode of the transportation. Because
bicycle
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 demands
large amount
Suggestion
a large amount
large amounts
 of
time
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 to cover small distance.
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, the JUNG has published the report of a recent survey in which citizens mentioned that, due to the fast bullet train they are able to save 60 minutes daily that was required to travel. To reiterate, many individuals outweigh
use
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the use
 of
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bicycle
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the bicycle
bicycles
a bicycle
 over
latest mode
Suggestion
the latest mode
 of transportation. It’s beneficial in term to keep the environment clean but at the same
time
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, it’s
time
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taking
an exchange of ideas via conversation
talking
 to cover small distance.

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