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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. Advantages and disadvantages.

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Imported foods are usually imported because of the demands of the people living in the
country
 importing the
food
.
On the other hand
, Local
food
 is
also
 being produced to cater the local demands. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the merits and demerits of allowing only local
food
 produced by the farmer to be consumed to protect the environment and an economy of a
country
. Foremost, advantage of allowing eatable items from other countries is to give a freedom of choices to the local people. There are various items in an
eatabale
suitable for use as food
eatable
 category and people have their own taste so allowing
this
 sort of arrangement will assist people to choose freely what to eat and vice versa.
For example
, In
first
 world countries, their people
seems
Suggestion
seem
 to be happy because of their policy which allow foods to import regardless of their effects on the environment and an economy.
On the other hand
, The disadvantage of allowing eatable items from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 part of the world encourage people not to give a priority to the local foods resulting
less
something that is lost
loss
 in usage of the local foods, increase in an environmental pollution and crises in the economy. After having so many choices of the
food
 items, a person can easily ignore the local
food
 item because they have been consuming it since their childhood.
For example
, In
third
 world countries when
country
 focuses to bring the
food
 items from their allies their people found to be focusing on newly brought foods
instead
 of the local foods. To sum up, Sometimes it is a good choice to allow the
food
 products from other
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
 and some time won't. It is entirely depends on the statistics of the
country
 who is willing to import the
food
 items.
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