Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer andd include any relevant examples from your own kowledge or experience

Nowadays, it is very common for students

to choose

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choosing

their

subject

and curriculum when they start university. Many of them prefer

follow

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to follow

their hobbies

wherease

on the other hand

whereas

various

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

choose

more serious course

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a more serious course, such

a more serious course such

such

as science or technology to get a better work with a good salary. In my opinion,

student

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students

the student

should choose

serious

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a serious subject

subject

to

assue

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

use

assure

issue

them

job

security and beneficial for their

futur

the time yet to come

future

lifestyle. In

this

essay

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will discuss both aspect of the given question and give you the

reason

of my opinion

First

of all,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe the main

reason

of

student

choice is due to their parents

pression

give an exhibition of to an interested audience

present

. Generally, the promote to their child the following propaganda

:

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:

a profession in science or technology will assure better

job

position and lifestyle

conditio

a state at a particular time

condition

.

This

argument is inked in their mind since they are young.

For instance

, my parents

have always gave

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have always given

me their opinion for each choice

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

made

for

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in

my

carriere

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

life

. Indeed, they have been a part of my

student

life

and often make me

pression

give an exhibition of to an interested audience

present

pressing

during my

exams

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exam

period or my university choice to give the best of

my self

reflexive form of "me"

myself

and do the right thing.

Therefore

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am certain that the main

reason

of their attitude was to help me to become conscious of the real

life

after we leave parents home The main argument of your

second

paragraph is

income

so

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will take it for my main argument.

Moreover

, the main

reason

that many

student

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students

choose to take serious

subject

is

income

. It is

noticible

capable or worthy of being perceived

noticeable

that a lot of

this

plural of "this"

these

people prefer to have a

job

they do not like with a high salary than their dream

job

with a low

income

.

For example

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am

passionated

having your attention fixated as though by a spell

fascinated

passionate

by

music but

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music, but

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

choseto

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chose to

study

science ingeneering

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science, engineering

science engineering

because

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will get a better pay.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am not

garanty

give surety or assume responsibility

guaranteed

guarantee

to have a

job

in music so

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

pefer

like better; value more highly

prefer

to preserve my passion for myself during my free-time.

Consequently

, we may

quoted

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quote

a famous idioms « money does not buy happiness » To conclude, parents thinking

have always been

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has always been

had always been

decisisive

determining or having the power to determine an outcome

decisive

in their child

life particularly

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life, particularly

for their

student

life

. They help them to be

conscous

intentionally conceived

conscious

that the lifestyle condition

depend

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depends

on their

job

.

thus

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Thus

, the

income

should be their own

preocupation

an idea that preoccupies the mind and holds the attention

preoccupations

and the

reason

why they have to choose

serious

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a serious subject, such

a serious subject such

serious subjects such

subject

such

as law and medicine is because they

garanty

give surety or assume responsibility

guarantee

them a

job

after university.