Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer andd include any relevant examples from your own kowledge or experience

Nowadays, it is very common for students
to choose
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choosing
their
subject
and curriculum when they start university. Many of them prefer
follow
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to follow
their hobbies
wherease
on the other hand
whereas
various
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
choose
more serious course
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a more serious course, such
a more serious course such
such
as science or technology to get a better work with a good salary. In my opinion,
student
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students
the student
should choose
serious
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a serious subject
subject
to
assue
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
assure
issue
them
job
security and beneficial for their
futur
the time yet to come
future
lifestyle. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both aspect of the given question and give you the
reason
of my opinion
First
of all,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe the main
reason
of
student
choice is due to their parents
pression
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
present
. Generally, the promote to their child the following propaganda
:
Accept space
:
a profession in science or technology will assure better
job
position and lifestyle
conditio
a state at a particular time
condition
.
This
argument is inked in their mind since they are young.
For instance
, my parents
have always gave
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have always given
me their opinion for each choice
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
made
for
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in
my
carriere
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
life
. Indeed, they have been a part of my
student
life
and often make me
pression
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
present
pressing
during my
exams
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exam
period or my university choice to give the best of
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
and do the right thing.
Therefore
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am certain that the main
reason
of their attitude was to help me to become conscious of the real
life
after we leave parents home The main argument of your
second
paragraph is
income
so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will take it for my main argument.
Moreover
, the main
reason
that many
student
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students
choose to take serious
subject
is
income
. It is
noticible
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
that a lot of
this
plural of "this"
these
people prefer to have a
job
they do not like with a high salary than their dream
job
with a low
income
.
For example
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am
passionated
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
passionate
by
music but
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music, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
choseto
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chose to
study
science ingeneering
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science, engineering
science engineering
because
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will get a better pay.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am not
garanty
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteed
guarantee
to have a
job
in music so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
pefer
like better; value more highly
prefer
to preserve my passion for myself during my free-time.
Consequently
, we may
quoted
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quote
a famous idioms « money does not buy happiness » To conclude, parents thinking
have always been
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has always been
had always been
decisisive
determining or having the power to determine an outcome
decisive
in their child
life particularly
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life, particularly
for their
student
life
. They help them to be
conscous
intentionally conceived
conscious
that the lifestyle condition
depend
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depends
on their
job
.
thus
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Thus
, the
income
should be their own
preocupation
an idea that preoccupies the mind and holds the attention
preoccupations
and the
reason
why they have to choose
serious
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a serious subject, such
a serious subject such
serious subjects such
subject
such
as law and medicine is because they
garanty
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
them a
job
after university.
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