Some people believe prefer that to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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In recent years we find many skyscrapers and an

apartment

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building compare to landed

house

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It's

because of, those tall buildings a

re convenient for many humans live

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are convenient for many humans living

have convenient for many humans lived

live convenient for many humans

are convenient for many humans live

in. S

till there

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Still, there

are many people who prefer to live in

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ouse.

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a house

the house

houses

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all

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calls

Apartment

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have his own advantages.

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, many people like to live in high floors where they have beautiful scenery and unblock sunlight.

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iving

the act of departing

leaving

apartment

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cost less maintenance as compare to landed

house

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, cleaning an

apartment

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much easier and faster than

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ouse.

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a house

houses

the house

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econdly most

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Secondly, most

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partment

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the apartment

o not have

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does not have

gardens and personal parking areas. Many maintenance services like cleaning staircase, lift and swimming

pool

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maintenance as well as parking

space

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overs

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cover

by an

Apartment

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service committee. N

owadays many

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Nowadays, many

apartments built in c

ity centre

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the city centre

with surrounded by many amenities, with affordable price. When we look at

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cost in c

entre

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the centre

of the city is much costlier than an

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. O

ther

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Another

point to consider is safety, usually most of

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partment

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the apartment

ave

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has

only one e

ntrance which

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entrance, which

creates more safety while going for l

ong vacation,

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a long vacation

the long vacation

just have to take care of one main door

instead

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of having multiple entrance. While having many advantages of living in an

apartment

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as per many people. There were still many people prefer to live in

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ouse.

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a house

the house

houses

Many houses have own garden, swimming

pool

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and playground, which makes it special. The person who loves gardening can e

njoys

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enjoy

the

space

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, having s

wimming

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a swimming pool

pool

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in, the house

in the house

house

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makes perfect leisure activity for adults and children. On the other aspect

house

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have good

space

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so the people who loves to keep pets can roam around. While looking at fun activity,

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ouse

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the house

is a b

est

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good

better

place to do barbeque, to see o

pen sky

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the open sky

from t

errace

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the terrace

its only possible in

house

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. Double story

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ave

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has

enough

space

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for guests and get-together on special occasion. I really enjoys t

o live

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living

in my

house

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, i

it is

it's

giving me opportunities to develop my gardening skills, me and my kids really enjoys watching stars on o

pen terrace

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the open terrace

of my

house

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. I really enjoy having a l

anded

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house landed

house

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. While there are a

dvantage

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advantages

living in

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ouse,

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the house

a house

many disadvantages

also

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there. Maintaining

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ouse

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a house

the house

is d

ifficult task

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a difficult task

for many housewives, it takes lots of time and energy. On top of it swimming

pool

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and gardens are the other big challenges to maintain it. Having

house

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means many entrances, which you must look for safety reasons. While looking at having an

apartment

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you always disturb by the

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-door neighbour,

in addition

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upstairs neighbours

also

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causing disturbance by making noise. Swimming

pool

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, gym, playground and c

arpark

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car park

you must share with other society members.

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econdly living

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Secondly, living

in high floor always takes time in lift to reach to your floor, many times you have to wait for other residents share the lifts.

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Topic Vocabulary:

privacy
outdoor activities
gardening
customization options
renovate
structural changes
investments
appreciation/depreciation
maintenance costs
utility costs
security features
gated entries
surveillance systems
shared amenities
community centers
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urban centers
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Some people believe prefer that to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries, the gap between the rich and poor is widening. What problems can this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

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Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, towns halls and sporting is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and • explain what happened • describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it • find out what they are going to do about it

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.