Some people believe prefer that to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
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apartment
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the long vacation
instead
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While having many advantages of living in an apartment
as per many people. There were still many people prefer to live in h
ouse.
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and playground, which makes it special. The person who loves gardening can enjoys
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ifficult task
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pool
and gardens are the other big challenges to maintain it. Having house
means many entrances, which you must look for safety reasons. While looking at having an apartment
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-door neighbour, in addition
upstairs neighbours also
causing disturbance by making noise. Swimming pool
, gym, playground and carpark
you must share with other society members. Suggestion
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in high floor always takes time in lift to reach to your floor, many times you have to wait for other residents share the lifts.Accept comma addition
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