You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him Suggest type of job that would be suitable for him

Dear John, I hope you are in good health. I am really glad to know about the completion of your bachelor’s degree. I am eager to give you my suggestion regarding either join a postgraduate college or hunt a

job

. As far as my personal experience is concerned, it is quite boring and hectic to pursue postgrad studies without any break. I think

its

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it's

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time for you to explore the

job

market. As you wrote in the letter most of your friends are going to search for a

job

. So, you would not be able to enjoy the university and concentrate as well. I am sure that you have the ideal transcript and now you should search

the

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appropriate

job

. In

this

way

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you will be able to support your family.

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, as far as

master’s

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a master’s

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degree is concerned, working in

field

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the field

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will provide you

the

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best idea about your interest area and expertise. It will

also

help you in choosing the subject to specialize in. As a bachelor in Business

administration

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you have a wide range of

job

types to work in. you can opt for corporate or research sector jobs. I know that you are fond of marketing, so I would suggest you

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some

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job

as marketing manager

of

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or

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social media marketing advisor. Believe me, it will open up a whole new outlook upon you.

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, you will get better professional learning platforms. I hope my words will help you to put your mind in the right direction. Best of luck for

you

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future. Regards Your Friend, Mark