In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where they are nurses to look after them. Sometimes, the government as to pay for this care. who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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While
this
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is getting serious concern for the society that who will be taking
care
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of the old people after their
retierment
the state of being retired from one's business or occupation
retirement
, they start moving to old age homes. I think it is the
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of both the family and
government
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to provide
the old
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older
people with some extra benefits so that they can lead a peaceful life. In one view, if we see that scenario of working lifestyle of current generation, they are occupied very much to earn the bread and butter that they do
not not
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not
have the time to take
care
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of
the old
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older
parents and
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they think that it is better if they can be taken
care
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in old age shelters and they provide the fee for that as they are unable to physically present and see their needs.
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, health issues of
old
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older
generation
needs
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need
to be taken
care
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with proper medication and
care
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, for that sometimes it is better to stay with the like company so than feel motivated and cure
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
. If we see the crowd in the evening parks,
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, we can see that most of the older people sit together to share their experience and laugh,
this
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is one of the ways that they feel relaxed after the whole day of loneliness and just sitting
inside
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in
the house. So we can say that it is fine for them to join other old people at the same place if it is by their will and their family members are visiting them regularly and paying their expenses. On the other view, their
care
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and facilities must be provided by both the
government
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and the family as it the duty of
family
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the family
families
to give respect and affection to their elders. But, everything could not be provided by family,
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, the medication and the drugs which are required by the older should be provided by the
government
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as sometimes they are so expensive
that is
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unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
. Their might be only one person who is a breadwinner for the entire family in that case the special needs should be taken
care
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by the
government
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as they the citizens of that region and served the country in younger age. In
conclusion if
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conclusion, if
we see the above discussed points we can conclude that
it
it is
it's
the not only the
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government but
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government, but
also
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the family who has to take
care
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of
the older
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older
people by affection and
care
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as they are the ones who deserved it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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