some people say history is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that in today's world; subject's like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these view and given your own opinion.

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There is an
on going
currently happening
ongoing
debate between which subject is important history or
science
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and
technology
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. In my view,
science
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and
technology
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is
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are
more
important but
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important, but
histrory
the aggregate of past events
history
also
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has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
place. Let us discuss
this
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in detail.
First
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, learning ancient civilization and past events are essential to humans. In order to understand the culture and the greatness of the
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nation
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nation's
hsitory
the aggregate of past events
history
plays a vital role. Anthropology is a subject which deals with the study of people in the olden days and present days.
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, studying old cultures
have sometimes be
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has sometimes been
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
to the
nation
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's pecuniary interests. Take an instance, the United States Historical Department
anounced
declared publicly; made widely known
announced
that it had
founded
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found
a wealth of approximately 30 million
dollors
the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
dolls
in the form of gold in the desert. Through
this
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discovery will be advantageous to Montana state. On the flip side, day by day
technology
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is emerging as a global force by giving opportunities
to
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To
the people across the globe.
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to
this
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, students and
younger generation
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the younger generation
are more inclined towards
science
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.
For example
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, globally only 3% of students are studying anthropology where as massive 70% of the younger generation
have
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has
a penchant for
technology
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. Numerical advancements had been invented in the
last
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five
decades which makes
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decades, which makes
life much happier for the people over all the nations. As a matter of face, parents
also
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would like to see their
offsprings
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offspring
in high paying skilled jobs rather than in low paying jobs.
This
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is possible only with the
science
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. The conclusion is,
eventhough
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even though
technology
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is important there should be
importance
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important
given towards our past history as a matter of respect.
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,
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nation
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the nation
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also encourage
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also encourages
students to acquire knowledge about the
nation
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and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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