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in your opinion,what are some benefits of working with IT industry

#industry
The IT
ndustry
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industry
 is one of the most challenging and
motivaing
impelling to action
motivating
 jobs today and it is the biggest
industry
 in the world.
Then
 we can get some
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 working with IT
industry
.
we
Suggestion
We
 can get high value jobs and working with IT
industry
, we can get along with the new
genaration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
 very quickly. As mentioned earlier, we can get some high value jobs, for an example, IT professionals
and
Suggestion
And
 software engineers.
Then
, the need for software engineers in the
digitalizing
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalising
 world is growing. And
also
, working with IT
industry
 has created a worldwide talent gap in technology
eccordingly
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
accordingly
.
ther
Suggestion
There
Ther
 is a need for IT professionals.
for
Suggestion
For
 that reason, the value of the IT
industry
 is increasing day by day. I think working with the IT
industry
 in the future could
yeild
be the cause or source of
yield
 far greater
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 than today.

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