In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe it is more important to protect the country side and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this.

The requirement of houses is seen in many
places but
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places, but
due to the
unavailabilility
the quality of not being available when needed
unavailability
in cities
,
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,
the only alternative places to construct them are the rural areas. Few people opine that it is essential to preserve the
country side
rural regions
countryside
rather than demolishing for new constructions. I completely agree with the above statement and shall discuss in detail how
this
would impact the lives of people and
also
the environment. The
first
and foremost impact of building houses in
countryside
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the countryside
would be on farmers and their families. Most of the area surrounding the villages are the farm lands where different varieties of crops are cultivated and harvested regularly depending on the seasons. Farm land in these places
are
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is
apparently fertile, as it was being used for cultivation for several years and
therefore
gives a rich crop yield. These crops are the major source of food for all surrounding urban areas and are
also
exported to many other places.
Therefore
, if
this
land is used for constructions, it will not only have
impact
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an impact
on the lives of many farmers and their families but
also
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the food production nationwide.
Secondly
, replacing the natural habitat with buildings in rural areas has tremendous effects on the environment. These natural areas are inhabited by ancient trees and several species of birds and animals. Deforestation in these areas for construction purpose would
consequently
lead to reduced rainfall, global warming, increase in endangered species and many more.
For instance
, forests are indirectly related to human livelihood, because they are responsible for rainfall, which is in turn is responsible for yielding better crops for the survival. Destroying the natural habitat would cause
ecological imbalance
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an ecological imbalance
. To summarise,
although
it is a known fact that due to overpopulation in the cities, it has become very difficult to find
place
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places
for new houses and are
therefore
looking for places in the
country side
rural regions
countryside
. It is very much essential to protect the
country side
rural regions
countryside
and prevent constructing new houses due to its negative effects on the human livelihood and the environment.

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