The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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diagram illustrates the amount of male and female in
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, who was in additional learning in which they were educating whole or specific Correct article usage
the UK
time
.
Overall
, the part
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part-time
time
of
extra learning is higher than full Change preposition
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time
for all in all different period
. The highest proportion of both types was reached by Fix the agreement mistake
periods
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a woman
woman
in 1990/91; and Fix the agreement mistake
women
also
, man
was reached to Add an article
the man
a man
same
ratio in Change the article
the same
the
full Correct article usage
apply
time
only.
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a specific
the specific
time
of additionally
education, the ratio of Change the word
additional
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the male
a male
male
was higher than Fix the agreement mistake
males
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a female
the female
female
with around 300 thousand during the period 1970/71.addation in the Fix the agreement mistake
females
others
periods the ratio of Correct pronoun usage
other
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the male
a male
male
was slightly more than Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
by about 200000.
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females
On the other hand
, the number of men were
evident more than Change the verb form
was
womens
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women
women's
especially
in 1970/71. But the number of Add the comma(s)
,especially
female
was exceed the number of man in 1980/Change to a plural noun
females
81while
in 1990/91 the statistics Correct your spelling
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