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Advantages and disadvantages for a country of Europe

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The bar graph illustrates the civilian
proportion
 of one European country where people saw a movie on different days from 2003 to 2007. Overall, people in
this
 country prefer to go to cinemas on weekends, especially on Saturday. Which is
top one
Suggestion
the top one
 of the survey over the years, accounted for more than 40%. Followed by Sunday, there are more than 30% people were planning to see a movie on Sunday.
In addition
, Sunday's
proportion
 accounted for 30% for 2003, 38% for 2005, and 33% for 2007. Civilians are more willing to the cinemas on Saturday and Sunday
in
Suggestion
at
 2005.
Besides
, the percentage of people who went to the cinemas on Friday remained stable from 2003 to 2007, which is 30%.
Furthermore
, less people were willing to go the cinemas on Monday and Wednesday
in
Suggestion
at
 2003.
However
, in 2005 the percentage of weekdays are similar. In 2007, the lowest
proportion
 is Wednesday, less than 10% of the civilians went to the cinemas on the day. To sum up, the
proportion
 of people went to the cinemas weren't
change
Suggestion
changed
changing
 a lot on weekends in these years.
Nonetheless
, the percentage altered during weekdays, especially
from
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for
 Monday to Thursday over the years.
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