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Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

#companies #organisations #employees #uniform
These days
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a lot of profit and non-profit Organisation provides and necessities their workers to wear
uniform
.But there are many people who have strong feelings on their arguments.
However
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wearing uniforms have more plethora advantages than drawbacks.Both viewpoints will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion. Among the disadvantages,
firstly
 it is really difficult for employees to wear one kind of dress over and over again.
Moreover
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it is quite tiring as well as boring.
Furthermore
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from staff, who has allergy always attempt to avoid it.A survey showed that
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most of the staff
prefer
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prefers
 to various dress at the workplace.
For instance
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my
cousin he
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cousin, he
 works at garments he has to wear a
uniform
 at work
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he could not accept it in any way.
As a
result he
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result, his
result his
 request to employer to alter
this
 rule. In spite of
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 disadvantages there are many merits
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Firstly
dressing
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is dressing
 a prescribed
uniform
 in the work that look eye-catching.
Moreover
, whenever
client
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a client
 comes to the office, he will treat them with due respect despite the success and failure in their duty.
For
example most
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example, most
 of
the young
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the younger
 generation
prefer
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prefers
 to select their job as a nurse.
a
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 Not only they always wear white
uniforms but
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uniforms, but
also
 they always care patients in daily basis.
they
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They
 seem
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to sustain a good environment of the hospital it is really needed.
Hence
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they display the discipline and uniqueness.
Secondly
, when workers are professionally dressed they feel confident and their behaviour more formal in the work.
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To
 conclude,
although
 There are several
drawbacks but
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drawbacks, but
 the advantages is far away.
However
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However
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if the company issues new roles of
uniform
 employees should need to avoid
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from
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