Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I can never forget the wonderful moments we spent together at the Scotland tour. I am writing this letter to specially request you to send photographs of that tour.

Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I can never forget the wonderful moments we spent together at the Scotland tour. I am writing
this
letter to specially request you
to send
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send
photographs of that tour. The best part of my Scotland trip was that I found a great friend like you. We many never have met
otherwise
. You had a very nice Canon
Power Shot
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PowerShot
camera with you. We clicked so many photographs during the entire tour. I was hoping you would send me the photographs. But, I understand that once we get back to the routine hectic schedules of life, some things slip out of mind. I shall be waiting eagerly for the pictures. I would
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
like the one in which we both have posed in front of a big fountain. Please send them as an e-mail attachment. I shall
get them
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get, them
printed from here. Alternatively, you could upload them on Picasa web albums and I can see them from there. When are you planning your
next
holiday? Please plan it for India. There is a lot to see and do here. I shall show you around and you will
also
have a chance to meet my parents. I have talked a lot about you to them.
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