the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women on different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The given bar chart indicates some information regarding the percentage of both sexes in Australia who did regular physical
activities
in 2010.
It is clear that
,
the highest percentage of physical Remove the comma
apply
activities
among men related to the 15 to 34 age
group
, whereas
, women were most active in the ages of 45 to 50.
As regards men, physical activities
were popular around
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among around
15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
group
with 52.80 percent
. After that there was a considerable drop to 42.2% and 39.5% between Change the spelling
per cent
the
25 to 34 and 34 to 44, respectively, at Correct article usage
apply
this
point, they were faced with a gradual growth with varying percent
.
If we look at women, there is an opposing trend, the 15 to 45 Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
had the lowest tendency to physical activities
with 42.7%, after which they experienced a gradual raise and reach a peak at 53.3 percent
in the 45 to 54 Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
, then
witnessed a steady decline with 46.7 percent
in the 65 and over.
It is interesting to say that, physical Change the spelling
per cent
activities
among women was
as popular as among men Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
the ages of 65 and over with Change preposition
between
negligible
difference Correct article usage
a negligible
by
4 Change preposition
of
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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