Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of high-income countries have been supporting developing countries in many ways in order to alleviate

poverty

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in globally.

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providing

fund

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funds

funding

to needy countries would help to

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combat

compete

against the economic problems of the

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, it would not be considered as a better solution in the long run.

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, other than the funding support

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,

various

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modes

of assistances,

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as sharing the skill and knowledge expertise, should be given to the

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world countries.

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,

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essay will discuss how the financial assistance alone would impact the

country

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and examine the benefits of non-financial aid. On the one hand, for the good reason, supporting the poor nation by donating considerable amounts

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would be seen as a worrying issue.

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Continued

funding will potentially cause the dependency syndrome.

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would mean that citizens of the

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have received and spent the

money

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to meet their short term needs. If any needs arise in the future, they are expecting that the government would support them again to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

those.

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, many countries

have been investing

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have invested

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the largest

amount

money

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in Africa since long time, but

poverty

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level has not been significantly reduced.

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, it is clearly seen that while donation of

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would

contribute the

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contribute, the

people in low income countries to improve their quality of life for a short period, it does not take as a better strategy to fight against the

poverty

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.

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, non-financial contribution by rich countries would be the best solution for fighting against the

socio

relating to human society and its members

social

and economic problems faced by poorer countries. Helping the needy countries by sharing the skills and knowledge expertise to develop the sustainable education system would be huge investment rather than giving fund to build the schools. It would not only enhance the current education system and but

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help to future generation to match

need

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the needs

needs

of international job market, which would lead to produce the productive

work force

the force of workers available

workforce

,

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contributing the economic development of the

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and improving the quality life of people. In conclusion, while financial assistance helps to the

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world nation, by considering the sustainability aspect, both

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and other mode of support should be provided in order to overcome the

poverty

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.