Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In recent years, details requested by employers for jobs

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are

drastically important step. While some believe that sharing personal information like hobbies, interest and marital status may be relevant, others think it is not. Herein I would discuss both the views and agree with the former. To start with, a company can decide

suitability

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the suitability

of the candidate for the job.

In other

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words, if

a job requires frequent outstation

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

, a male, unmarried person would be best suitable. It

also

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gives an Idea about the availability of applicant to stretch working in office.

For instance

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, for a married female working in day shift would be convenient. To add, involving employees in their hobbies in

office leisure

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office, leisure

time would

also

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increase retention in office.

On the contrary

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, sharing of data can

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lead to bias and breach of privacy.

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, if

interviewer

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the interviewer

an interviewer

likes

cricket he

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cricket, he

/she will select candidates who like cricket as well.

Thus

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giving preference to

candidate

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a candidate

they like.

Further

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this

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, there are

also

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chances of misusing it. That might get influenced by

high status

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the high status

family

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the family

or the lower status of parents and decide regarding suitability of

applicant

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the applicant

applicants

an applicant

Also

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, sharing these can be used by colleagues and boss for public insults.

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, people can draw conclusion regarding person's character as well. To conclude with sharing of personal information is

inevitable but

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inevitable, but

can lead to disadvantages as well.

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Thus in

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Thus, in

my opinion relevance of sharing family details is

undeniable but

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undeniable, but

authorities must maintain it under privacy policy as well.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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