There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

An increasing number of people around the world are nowadays more concerned about global warming. It is certainly true that

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has happened due to the human activities, which disturb the nature.

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essay will discuss how nature has disturbed due to people’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and examine solutions to tackle

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problem.

Environment

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The environment

has severely affected since the beginning of the industrial revolution and the urbanization. The most important environmental issue is climbing up the global temperature. One of the reasons is that deforestation. The forest is the primary source of storing

enormous amount

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enormous amounts

an enormous amount

of

carbon

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dioxide, which help to reduce the

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of

carbon

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in the atmosphere. By destructing the forest for meeting

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human

needs could markedly rise the

green house

a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions

greenhouse

gases,

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Carbon

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dioxide. Another

casue

an occurrence of something

case

cause

choice

would be increasing usage of

fossils

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fossil

fuel across the country.

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is because, private vehicle usage has considerably grown all over the world,

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leading to increase the emission of

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level

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by

buring

the act of burning something

burning

the fuel,

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as petrol.

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problem can be controlled by taking an action in micro and macro

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. With regard to the micro

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, individuals play a key role

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in

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. Having said that, each person has to behave in a responsible way to protect and prevent

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damage of climate.

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could be done by

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

small changes in their daily activities,

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, switch

of

from a particular thing or place or position

off

the car engine while

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stops

at

traffic light

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the traffic light

traffic lights

a traffic light

and plant at least one tree wherever they live. In terms of macro

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actions, government and authorities

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have

the responsibility to take an adequate measures to keep the atmosphere temperature low. Imposing the law against the people who cut the tree illegally could reduce the

carbon

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level

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of

environment

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environmental

.

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, enhancing the public transport system would reduce the private vehicle usage as the majority of people tend to choose state transport

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of private cars to go anywhere, which would significantly decline the

green house

a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions

greenhouse

gases. In conclusion, while it is certainly true that human activities would drastically influence the climate change, it can be prevented by taking necessary actions by the people and the government of the country.