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Education is very important. How can children who are disinterested in study be motivated to learn?

#education #children #study
Although
knowledge
 comes from various streams
,
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,
education
 has proven to be the path to
knowledge
. Losing the
interest
 in
education
 can be due to various reasons and understanding the reasons could pave way for better
education
 for children.
Educational system
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The educational system
An educational system
 has evolved
in
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into
 an immense level. As
such
 moving from real life learning
,
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,
 academic focus on teaching theoretical subjects in the recent days. Due to the change in
education
,
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,
 children tend to lose
interest
 as they are more classes oriented and not field oriented. Imparting
knowledge
 in children should be drilled down to a more activity based
classes
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class
. So that children may understand the practical and theory behind the concept. Introducing new concepts through fun learning would make the child naturally to get interested and will be more focused.
Thus maintaining
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Thus, maintaining
 the focus is the key in not losing
interest
. Institutions can come up with various field works
,
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,
 camping and activities through which children can gain profound
knowledge
.
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.
 Parents
also
 should focus on the intellect of their child. Focusing on the grades would naturally create a competitive environment for
child
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the child
children
a child
 rather than imparting
education
.
Therefore
focus
Suggestion
the focus
 should lessen on the score card and more on the learning itself. Anything
that is
 taught via an interesting method stays in the mind longer and lead to creative thinking ability. In Conclusion,
education
 is not only the key in sustaining
life but
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life, but
 can be introduced efficiently and through creativity which not only sparks
interest
 but pave
way
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the way
 for logical and analytical reasoning.
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