The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts explain the
water
usage
rate
for various reasons in six continents of the world.
overall
, areas
such
as South
America
, Africa, Central, and Southeast
Asia
used
water
for agricultural purposes most preferably.
In contrast
, North
America
and
Europe
had
significant
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a significant
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portion of
water
usage
in the industrial area.
Firstly
, in the case of the industrial context,
Europe
was at the highest peak, which is 53% of the whole
usage
.
Similarly
, North
America
was the
second
most(48%
rate
) utilized. The proportion of 10% and 9% was acquired by South
America
and Africa respectively. Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
were at the same
rate
i.e 7%. In terms of household activities, South
America
took up 19
percent
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per cent
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of
water
.
Moreover
,
Europe
and North
America
had 15% and 13% of the
water
usage
rate
respectively.
Finally
, Africa, South
America
, Central, and South
Asia
were more inclined to
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water
for agricultural reasons, being the widest
water
used
overall
.
Europe
has more than a quarter(32%) of
water
usage
.

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