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You received a letter from your friend informing you that his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advice on - which places they should visit, - where should they live, - invite them to do something with you.

#friend #parents #visit #area #advice #places
Hi Dave, Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My joy knew no bound when I found your letter about your plan to visit my home country along with your progenitors. I feel really honoured that you have asked me about prominent tourist places in my region. I'm glad to tell you that Islamabad is a diverse
city
 with a lot of attractions. You could visit the Faisal mosque, which is the largest one in the world. Other than that, Navy museum and Modern zoo are the latest attractions in the
city
 which are attracting thousands of visitors every day. I would like to suggest the Blue
city
 hotel in the main
city
 centre for stay because it has a reasonable price with high standard living rooms.
In addition
, it is near to my home so you can visit me anytime. I would
also
 like to invite your whole family at a dinner. We will share our memorable time and remember our nostalgic memories. Hoping to see you soon. Yours lovingly, Farrukh
Submitted by farrukh.maqsood on

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