On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. - describe the item you lost - explain how you lost it - tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding the loss of my DSLR camera during my travel. I lost my DSLR camera of Nikon model No. K1250 with leather case

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lens of 20 XD zoom. I had purchased the camera

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the lens online, four months ago, the copy of the purchase is enclosed herewith. I was on a tour to

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North Bengal, where I lost it.

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the hilly road by jeep, I could not collect it back. I have made a complaint of the lost item with the nearest police station, the copy of which is

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enclosed herewith for your ready reference. As

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I have taken travel insurance from your company which covers the cost of anything

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lost, I would be grateful if you could make

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arrangement

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to address my claims. I am enclosing

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copy of my policy for your reference. I would be thankful for your swift response. Yours faithfully, Samar Thapa

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
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