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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by cotegory, 2002

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The table provides information
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on
 national consumer spending in five different countries by different categories in 2002. There are 5
countries namely
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countries, namely
 Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey. In general, Turkey is the most consumptive country that spending their
money
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.
Then
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, Sweden is the lowest number to spend their
money
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.
Also
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, food
/
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drinks
/
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Tobacco is the
favorite
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favourite
category
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 for all
country
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countries
 to spend their
money
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.
Then
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, the lowest number of the consuming
category
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 is leisure
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education. Turkey was consuming their
money
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 32.14% on food
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drinks
/
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tobacco/
category
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, it was the highest percentage compare to all countries
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all categories.
Then
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, they spent 4.35% for the leisure
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education
category
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 (the lowest number).

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