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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

#children #parents #part #time #job
In the summary
,
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,
parents wish their children to be engaged even in free
time
 by getting a
part
time
job
.The reason might be just to make sure
children
Suggestion
the children
 won't do any wrong things in boredom.
Firstly
,
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,
the children in present days have no value of
time
 and
money
.If there is a free
time
 they either just watch
t
the thing named or in question
it
.v.
,
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,
play video-games or just go out for a movie or some mall to spend
money
 on shopping.
This
 trend can only be changed if they choose to do some
part
time
job
for example
,
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,
working in
a n
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
an
.g.
o
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O
 where you can help the government school children.
you
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You
 can share
you
of you or yourself
your
 knowledge with them.One of the
advantage
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advantages
 is you become more independent when you are working no matter it is a small
job
 or a bigger one.You can develop the ability of learning something new rather than being at home and wile away the free
time
.
Secondly
,
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,
There are many countries where children are working in a
part
time
job
 like America
,
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,
United kingdom
,
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,
Australia where
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Australia, where
 the child once they reach 14 years have their own earnings and some do complete their later education by working
part
time
.
However
,
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,
some disadvantages like they discover new ways to have fun like drinking
,
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,
having drugs as they earn the
money
 for themselves and even they don't really need parents permission to spend the
money
.There is a chance they trade
from
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for
 the
money
 by doing illegal things and go to jail which in return
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
 their career. In the conclusion
,
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,
it is
better
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best
 that parents encourage to work in a
part
time
job
 where the child gain knowledge and good communication and the right use of spending
money
 for better purposes.
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