It is widely acknowledged that there are significant learning differences between boys and girls. Therefore many people believe that single-sex education in the best method to help students succeed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a system? Give reasons for your answer and your opinions.

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In the summary

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the substantial way of learning between boys and girls differently depending upon the way of understanding the concept.Like

for example

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Boys typically understand just by reading from

book

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the book, however

the book however

however

the girls usually by-heart line to line rather than thinking logically. On one hand

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people think that as the process of learning is varied from boys to girls the single-sex

education

is the best rather than co-

education

in order to help the students succeed.According to me

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this

is not a great idea as the communication between boys and girls will never be substantial and

this

is a clear gender bias differentiation which is unacceptable.

However

There are many advantages and disadvantages of

such

system.Let's begin with advantages like there are some restrictions in a co-

education

as boys should respect girls

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No matter whoever

does

engage in

makes

the mistake the blame would be on boys as girls are too sensitive

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girls can't be so open to talk or communicate with other girls when boys are seated between them.If there is only a single system for each they can enjoy their freedom and the same applied to boys they don't really have to worry about any girl complaining about their behaviour.There is a chance that children get attracted

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things like love and infatuation which can impact on their

career

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career, although

although

there is not

such

thing entertained if there is only single-sex

education

On the other hand

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there are few disadvantages like the communication between a boy and girl has to be nurtured right from a young age if they are separated Later

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in future even when they are employed they face difficulties in communicating.The more educated you become less morals will be learned in

such

type.They develop inferiority complex when put in

such

type of

education

.Many results show that students who have studied in co-

education

are far successful in life. In the conclusion

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I would say if a child has to be all rounder with good skills

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morals and ethics and develop good communication and effective way of learning

then

there should be no single-sex

education

rather everyone should only prefer educating both equally with equal importance.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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1Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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