It is widely acknowledged that there are significant learning differences between boys and girls. Therefore many people believe that single-sex education in the best method to help students succeed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a system? Give reasons for your answer and your opinions.

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the substantial way of learning between boys and girls differently depending upon the way of understanding the concept.Like

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Boys typically understand just by reading from

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the book, however

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the girls usually by-heart line to line rather than thinking logically. On one hand

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people think that as the process of learning is varied from boys to girls the single-sex

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is the best rather than co-

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in order to help the students succeed.According to me

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is not a great idea as the communication between boys and girls will never be substantial and

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is a clear gender bias differentiation which is unacceptable.

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There are many advantages and disadvantages of

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system.Let's begin with advantages like there are some restrictions in a co-

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as boys should respect girls

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the mistake the blame would be on boys as girls are too sensitive

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girls can't be so open to talk or communicate with other girls when boys are seated between them.If there is only a single system for each they can enjoy their freedom and the same applied to boys they don't really have to worry about any girl complaining about their behaviour.There is a chance that children get attracted

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things like love and infatuation which can impact on their

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there is not

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thing entertained if there is only single-sex

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there are few disadvantages like the communication between a boy and girl has to be nurtured right from a young age if they are separated Later

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in future even when they are employed they face difficulties in communicating.The more educated you become less morals will be learned in

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type.They develop inferiority complex when put in

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type of

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.Many results show that students who have studied in co-

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are far successful in life. In the conclusion

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I would say if a child has to be all rounder with good skills

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morals and ethics and develop good communication and effective way of learning

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there should be no single-sex

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rather everyone should only prefer educating both equally with equal importance.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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345 words

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