The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph reveals striking information about the average
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person in four different countries over a period of 40 years.
Overall
, the carbon
dioxide
emitted by Correct article usage
the United
United
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the United
kingdom
remains the highest between 1967 to 2007. Also
, United
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the United
kingdom
and Sweden saw a considerable decrease in their Change the capitalization
Kingdom
carbon
dioxide
emissions
, in contrast
, Italy and Portugal increased their carbon
dioxide
emissions
during these 40 years.
In the year 1967, Portugal emitted nearly 1 metric tonne of the
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apply
carbon
dioxide
, however
, in comparison, United
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the United
kingdom
emitted 12 times more carbon
dioxide
. By 2007, carbon
dioxide
emitted by united
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the united
kingdom
plunged to nearly 9 metric tonnes and a contrasting trend was followed by Italy and Portugal where the emissions
were
increased by 2-5 metric tonnes Unnecessary verb
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overall
.
Another interesting fact highlighted by the charts is the fact that although
, in 1967, Sweden's carbon
dioxide
emissions
were nearly 9 times of
Portugal's, by the year 2007, both Change preposition
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the
countries produced the same amount of Correct article usage
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carbon
dioxide
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