Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

It is true that sports activity is essential for children. While some people believe that parents should carry out these activities for their

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a young person of either sex

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at home, others believe that it should be included in the

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's curriculum. My inclination is in line with the latter view.

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with, one of the benefits of children performing exercise at home is that they can focus more on other important subjects in the

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is because nowadays the syllabus of subjects like Maths, Science and Arts, is so vast that there is very less time left for the children for other activities.

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, shifting the session of physical sports at home would provide students with sufficient time to learn the subjects mentioned above.

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, exercise or sports

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with the vulnerability of getting injured. When compared to teachers, parents are normally more cautious about their children,

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enhancing the safety of children.

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, shouldering the responsibility of keeping a track of

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physical workout regime presents some drawbacks.

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, as parents usually lack full knowledge about fitness regimes, they might fail to consistently carry out these activities at homes.

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might impede the

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physical well-being.

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, there

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of sports activities which requires minimum space and equipments that often homes does not offer. That said, schools, because the equipments will be used by more number of users, afford to have those tools. In conclusion,

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focussing on other subjects in the

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safety is important, compromising the students' health in growing age and limiting the array of sports activities should be taken into consideration. In my opinion, it is better for the

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going children that physical exercises are performed in

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