The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

As our society is progressing, the old thought of punishing students physically is fading away.
However
,
few
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a few
still believe that these punishments should still be exercised to ensure that the students learn manners.
This
essay will discuss why students should not be beaten up.
Although
some students disrespect their teachers and lack basic manners.
Therefore
, out of
frustation
the feeling that accompanies an experience of being thwarted in attaining your goals
frustration
, some teachers exercise the right of corporal
punishment but
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punishment, but
it does more damage than a remedy. The
first
and foremost reason that why physical beating should be discouraged is that it reduces the level of motivation of a
student
towards the studies. A
student
will develop a constant fear of his teacher and will be unable to communicate the hardships he faces at school.
This
fear and lack of communication may give rise to
stress which
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stress, which
in turn will lead towards low performance.
As a result
, a
student
may take a step towards self harming.
For instance
, in our country, many students commit suicide just because they are abused at school.
Secondly
.
the
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The
students who experience being hit by teachers are mostly made fun of. They are laughed upon by their peers which in turn makes them feel degraded. As a consequence,
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at
a
student
develops
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developed
a strong feeling of hatred towards their teachers and may plan up to take a revenge. A case was reported in our country in which a group of students beat up a teacher just because they were physically punished at school. Events like these
also
lowers the self esteem of a teacher. In
conclusin
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, teachers should not opt for the physical treatment for well being of students rather they should influence students with their good qualities.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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