Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

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The Internet offers

alot

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a lot

of services that all the people need like the news about the whole universe

Accept space

communication between

peaple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

peoples

all over the world, all the information anybody needs about

particular thing

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a particular thing

particular things

Also

, selling and buying goods which is the field that many people are interested in it lately.

This

field has its advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages show in: helping not wasting time or effort in searching about

specific thing

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specific things

a specific thing

, offering the products that

maybe

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may be

rarely exist, delivering the requested product to the home,

Also

, when the internet user sees something amazing in another country and he can't get it,

this

process makes it easier to deliver

this

something to his home. But

on the other hand

this

phenomenon has its disadvantages like: sometimes the delivered products doesn't like the viewing one, cheating may be happened by

this

process by paying the price of the goods without getting the goods itself, Sometimes, the price of the product is highly more than the expected price and that because of the delivering services. In the end, nothing is completely amazing, and as one example of

this

is the phenomenon of selling goods by using the internet. And that says that we shouldn't trust anything we see on the

internet but

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internet, but

we should see an evidence on the product safety.

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Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?