You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?

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I am writing

this

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letter to let you know about the problems that I am facing

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with

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the accommodation provided by our organization in Buena Park, Los Angeles city. I was given a 1 bhk apartment which has

hall

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a hall

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, bathroom, kitchen and balcony. When I came to

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flat for the

first

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time I was quite impressed by

surroundings

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the surroundings

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and infrastructure of the building.

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, there are some problems I am facing in

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flat. When I try to switch on AC it is not turning on. In

washroom

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water is not coming for some times in a day. When I turn on

stove

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the stove

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to cook food it

is not lighten

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does not lighten

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up. These are the basic needs of a human for a day to day life. As a consequence, it is very difficult for me to stay in

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flat. I expect you to either shifting me to

other

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another

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accommodation where all the facilities are working or making the facilities in

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flat work

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flatwork

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right. I hope you take immediate action towards these problems I am facing and help me out as soon as possible. Thank you.

Wed Dec 11 2019

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

187 words

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You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?

The Greeting

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