The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

Out of nine planets, only our planet is being considered place of life, many species made it as their home from centuries along with the devastating creatures like humans. Who made other species striving up for their life. We use to worship animals as the clone of the god from
centuries but
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centuries, but
unfortunately, they have been prisoned due to human greed. Every life had a value and deserve equal rights as others, if we try to press, the result will cost
price
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the price
of arm and leg.To explain clearly humans
are well trained
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is well trained
machines on the earth who are making
exploitation
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the exploitation
of the natural habitat for
sake
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the sake
of their own motives and causing the imbalance on the earth habitat There is a strong argument
by
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with
some people that animals are being protected in by creating artificial habitat known as sanctuaries and
zoo parks
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zoo, parks
, if we question our self in a broader
way why
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way, why
we need to keep these animals in the artificial habitats already if they have their own? where making these animals to more vulnerable and feeding them in dark, bleeding them to death Adding
further
, I would say Governments and NGO organization should follow the symmetrical policies in terms of monitoring and executing the rights of animals
instead
of fighting in the debates which doesn’t lead these animals to acquire their rights Concluding, I would say that there should be more up straight laws for animal abuse, the same which we designed for our exploiting machines commonly known as humans

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