You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Babu. Recently, I have passed an interview for the position of DevOps Engineer in your organization and I have received the offer letter for the same. I am supposed to report on November 15th,

however

, I regret to inform you that I cannot join on the pre-agreed date. I have been down with Chickenpox for almost a week now. My doctor advised me to stay at home because it is a highly contagious disease. I am not feeling well either due to

blister

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all over my body and the running temperature. My physician suggested taking one more week of bed rest to recover completely. I can submit a medical certificate highlighting my current state of health from my doctor if required. I sincerely apologies for the inconvenience

this

may cause, but as you know there is nothing I could have done to avoid

this

situation. I am hoping that

this

will not affect our relationship. Requesting you to kindly postpone my date of joining to November 30th.

Also

, please do let me know if I will need to submit any other form of proof. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Babu

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7 paragraphs

196 words

8.50

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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