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international
student
exchange
programs
involve exchanging
students
of one
country
or place, with those of another
country
or place to complete part of their education there. A lot of people find these
programs
very beneficial,
while
there are some people who do not approve of
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. I believe that the educational, personal and long-term advantages of these
programs
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teenage
students
, outstrip the disadvantages. There are many educational benefits of these
programs
. Because of international learning and knowledge,
students
accept and understand different cultures and their perspectives.
Secondly
, as the
students
mingle with the local people in another
country
, they get to learn a new language. They become aware of
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and adopt alternative, multi-faceted approaches to learning. They develop analytical and
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skills.
Students
have enhanced interest in global issues,
as well as
a broader general knowledge. At the personal level, the most noticeable change in returned
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their enhanced
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and self-esteem. They become mature, as they get to confront challenges outside a familiar comfort zone. They develop life-long friendships and
also
appreciate their home and family even more than
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the long run,
students
who go on to tertiary studies find themselves more comfortable in 'foreign' environments. They have better job opportunities.
This
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prospective employers in almost every field look favourably upon experience gained
while
living overseas and knowledge obtained of another language and culture.
On the other hand
, the most obvious disadvantage of a
student
exchange
program is the cultural shock that any
student
has to go
throu8h
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through
.
For instance
, if a
student
from
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India
has to shift for an
exchange
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vice-versa, it is going to be a big challenge
initially
. The
student
needs to be acquainted with at least one of the official languages of the host
country
otherwise
it would be difficult to stay there. Next, the
student
has to adjust or compromise with the habits of the homestay family.
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the time zone difference is a big problem during the initial days in the guest
country
.
To sum up
, there might be a lot of problems in another place for the teenage
student
, but it is an opportunity that can change the
students
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for the better.
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is altogether a good blend of educational benefits
along with
personality development.
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