The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the
number
of Canadian students
graduated
over a period of 15 years. Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
It is clear that
the amount of both male and female students
increases
between 1992 and 2007, but the Change the verb form
increase
number
of female graduates
significantly exceeds the number
of male graduates
.
In 1992, just under 100.000 of
women Change preposition
apply
were
graduated from Canadian universities. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
number
was slightly fluctuating at around 100.000 people
from 1993 to 2001 until its trend rose dramatically from about 110.000 people
in 2002 to over 140.000 people
in 2007.
With regards to male graduates
, it is clear that
their number
well
under female Add a missing verb
is well
students
. In
the beginning of the given period, the Change the preposition
At
amount
of men Change the quantifier
number
graduated
from universities was just above 70.000 Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
people
. There was a slight rose to about 78.000 students
over the next
3 years, but then
the trend with fluctuations experienced a fall to about 72.000 people
in 1998 and a rise to about 75.000 graduates
in 2000. After that, the number
surged gradually to just above 90.000 students
in
the end of the given period.Change the preposition
at
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, graduates, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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