You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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Dear

Zohi

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John

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amI

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really glad to know about your keen interest in

IPL

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which is formally known as

Indian

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the Indian

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Premiere

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Premier

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League. Please allow me to introduce to you what is happening in

country

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the country

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, people sharing their

post

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posts

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about beloved cricket

event

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events

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Most

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The most

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upcoming headlines of

this

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quarter in

sports

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the sports

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section will be

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IPL

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the IPL

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cricket match, which currently involves 7 teams, and they currently planning to introduce

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them to

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more new teams.

IPL

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involve cricketer around SA, aus, nw,eng, as

such

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. People around the world

shown

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have shown

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their interest and love

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this

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event,

event

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an event

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run for 2-3 months, every day 2 matches minimum as

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foreign cricketer are involved in

IPL

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, crowd come to cheer them from oversees. I personally

supports

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support

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CSK because of Dhoni, he's

fabulous

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a fabulous

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person as well as

cricketer

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a cricketer

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, his involvement, approach

behavior

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behaviour

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towards

team

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the team

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made my mind

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apply

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cheer CSK, team

practicing

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practising

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very hard

now a days

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nowadays

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. I am following them through

Instagram

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the Instagram

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fan page, they update details

everyday

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every day

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. looking forward to

start

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starting

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IPL

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matches , My tickets in booked tickets in advance, there are many stories which can't be explained in one go, Come to India we will cherish

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IPL

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the IPL

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series together. If you have any

question

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questions

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, please let me know. I would be

more happy

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happier

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to answer you and look forward to

here

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hear

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from you soon. Best regards Jiya

Mon Dec 16 2019

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

222 words

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Structure your letter

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