On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

#holiday #item #travel #insurance #cost #manager #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to my lost

laptop

. I have travelled

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Paris at the

last

week. When I came back

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home I saw that I have lost my

laptop

. Its properties are Toshiba 650D, RAM 8GB with hard disc 1 TB.

Cost

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The cost

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of my

laptop

is $1650. There are three

sticker

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stickers

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- Batman, Messi and Spiderman on

cover

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of my

laptop

that my little brother glues on it. It is very valuable for me. I think

insurance

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the insurance

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company should return

value

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the value

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of my notebook. Please report

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to me

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that what I should do

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the next

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step

this

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of this

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process. I hope you will quickly initiate suitable solutions in regard to

this

matter. Please respond at

the

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earliest convenience. Yours sincerely Garay Ashirov

Submitted by garayasirov on Tue Dec 17 2019

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

128 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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