Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In the recent years the government has resorted in the increase in
price
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the price
of petrol as the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. But in my
opinion
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opinion, this
this
will not solve the rising problems,
hence
in
this
essay I would like to explain why
this
might not be the best solution. The two main reasons why I would disagree with
this
statement is
firstly
because of the
convience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
to travel from one destination to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. People would resort
to use
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to using
their own vehicle in order to travel, as the public transport facilities are not well developed.
Therefore
, it has become unavoidable for people to
using
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use
their vehicle
.
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.
Secondly
, people are ignorant about the pollution their vehicles are causing to the
enviornment eventhough
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environment, even though
enviornment even though
environment even though
environment eventhough
they are well informed regarding the climate changes and
deplection
the act of decreasing something markedly
depletion
of natural resources.
For instance
, effects due to the pollution
has been discussed
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have been discussed
all over the world and
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
has been provided through education and social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
, but still most individuals even world leaders take
this
matter lightly. The measures

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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