Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Farrukh and I am working with Buyer Pharmaceuticals as a counselling representative of medicines. I am writing

this

letter to request you to finance me in pursuing a

part time

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German language course. Let me explain it in detail. I have completed my graduation from Melbourne

university

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University

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in pharmacy,

last

year.

In addition

, I have one year of

experiance

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experience

in counselling patients with exceptional communication skills. Unfortunately, my only weakness is that I could not speak

German

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the German

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language and I have to deal with a lot of patients which belong to Germany. It would be great if you grant me the

tution

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tuition

fee for doing

this

six month

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certificate. It includes four months

theory based

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theory-based

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classes related to patient psychology and two months

practical

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speaking with native speakers.

This

course will help me to build basic vocabulary and

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a way

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way

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ways

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to effectively counsel the specific speakers of

german

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the german

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language.

This

would not only help me to learn a new skill

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but

also

would be beneficial for the patients to understand their medicines. Hoping for a

postive

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positive

response from your side regarding

this

matter! Yours faithfully, Farrukh maqsood

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7 paragraphs

194 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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