Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Farrukh and I am working with Buyer Pharmaceuticals as a counselling representative of medicines. I am writing

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letter to request you to finance me in pursuing a

part time

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part-time

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German language course. Let me explain it in detail. I have completed my graduation from Melbourne

university

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in pharmacy,

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year.

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, I have one year of

experiance

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experience

in counselling patients with exceptional communication skills. Unfortunately, my only weakness is that I could not speak

German

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the German

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language and I have to deal with a lot of patients which belong to Germany. It would be great if you grant me the

tution

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tuition

fee for doing

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six month

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certificate. It includes four months

theory based

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theory-based

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classes related to patient psychology and two months

practical

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of practical

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speaking with native speakers.

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course will help me to build basic vocabulary and

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a way

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way

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ways

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to effectively counsel the specific speakers of

german

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the german

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language.

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would not only help me to learn a new skill

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apply

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but

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would be beneficial for the patients to understand their medicines. Hoping for a

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positive

response from your side regarding

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matter! Yours faithfully, Farrukh maqsood

farrukh.maqsood

Dec 19, 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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