Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inquire about my

luggage

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, which I missed during my flight journey from London to Vancouver.

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Wednesday,December 25, I

traveled

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from London to Vancouver on my LB110 for my business purpose in your airline.During my flight journey,

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put in on the overhead bin and unfortunately I lost

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of my hand

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while getting down from the plane. I have realized

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it only after

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arrived at my home. It is a black American Tourister hand

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on wheels .It weighs 8 kg and has 2 outside pockets and one is locked with

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lock. I had my formal clothes, my new Jacket and important office documents. Those documents are highly important to me for the upcoming presentation

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month.

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kindly request you to check on it and please let me know whether my hand

luggage

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is present. Write to me at my return address. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Siva

ranjanimohan81Thu Dec 19 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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