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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

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As the people are moving forward with their talents and ideas, so do is the technology and advancements in them. We can
tell
express in words
say
 about a
nation whether
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nation, whether
 it is developed or not by just looking into its technological developments and advancements in various fields of technology.
Now a days computers
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Nowadays, computers
Nowadays computers
 are more common than they were 20 years ago. We can find computers in almost every house, which shows how much the people are after it. The implementation of computers in various fields of
work
 is making the
work
 easy and it
also
 takes a very less time to complete a particular process. But, by implementing computers into the job
sector
 results in losing of that job for an individual person. We can say that the computers are slowly replacing people in almost all the jobs. Some examples of
this
 are the use of computers in manufacturing
sector
, processing
sector
, medical
sector
,
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 even we are getting
driverless
 cars and so
on all
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on, all
 thanks to the implementation of computers into the works which are previously done by humans. In the near future, we may see that the computer operated robots may
also
 replace humans from military, nursing and other small activities. There are numerous problems that a common man is facing due to
this
 situation. The main problem is that he/she is losing their jobs and becoming unemployed and are unable to do other
work
. I agree that computers make less mistakes than humans, but the total use of computers may be a very serious problem for the future generations as there will be no jobs left in
this
 world to do. Humans who are depending more on computers may lose their intellectual ability and imaginative and creative powers. In conclusion, we need to take
this
 problem seriously and try to get a solution out of it so that many people may not lose their jobs by the implementation of computers into the
work
.

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