You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do

Dear Sir,
Iam
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I am
I'm
writing to express my displeasure that the
course
work programme has been cancelled
this
summer. One of the major
reason
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I chose to study
Businesss
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Business
English at your institute
because
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is because
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of the chance to participate in the work placement programme. There are many English Schools in London that offer Business English
course
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, but not many who
oofer
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offer
the chance to go and work in a local company as part of their curriculum program. Your school offers more expensive tuition
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to others,
however
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I was willing to pay extra because I thought the
course
program was better quality. Now that they cancelled the program
Iam
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I am
disaapointed
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disappointed
because I have spent a lot of money. As the
course
programme is now different to the one advertised, I would like to request a full refund of the money I have paid for
this
course
.
Iam
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I am
I'm
looking forward
for
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your prompt reply regarding
this
matter.
Your
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Faithfully, Donna May Samong

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