One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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the majority
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the car
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transport
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also recommend
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some solution to alleviate
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the problem
along with a
car
sharing Kim and
increase
the
number
of public
transport
. More and more people access
car
rather than
use
the buses and trains ever before. The major causes of
this
growing trend is
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the car
has become more affordable for average people, it is no longer a
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luxury
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further
cases of the
traffic
congestion is the lack of public
transport
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People
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use
the public
transport
because the quality of service as well as it is not secure for
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like Dhaka and Mumbai etc. People feel more comfortable and
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car
or taxi rather than utilise the public vehicles.
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often resulting
traffic
jam because the
number
of cars
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is increasing
is increased
so rapidly. Starting new schemes
such
as
car
sharing scheme and
increase
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transport
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the road
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the road
as well as it can decrease the expenditure of the
car
maintenance
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the government can estimate a good budget to
increase
the
number
of public
transport
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using the public
transport
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they will reduce the
use
of their own
car
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traffic
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the street
streets
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traffic
on
road
car
sharing scheme and
increase
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the best
step to touch the goal of zero
traffic
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in every urban areas are
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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