You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, complain about the problem; propose action for the store to take; request confirmation that this is agreed

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report a technical fault
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the new television I bought from your Maharagama showroom. I ordered the TV
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Friday my bill number is DB051. Your delivery team brought the device yesterday evening.  Right away I unpacked the television and followed the manual to set it up.
However
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the power, there is sound coming out of it but no display. I check
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and went through the user manual several
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, but
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I couldn't bring up the pictures. I am sure that
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TV box is a faulty one.
Hence
, please send me a replacement as soon as possible.
This
time make sure that it works before sending it, that way we both can save our time.  Please make sure to send me a written
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that you are going to replace
this
with a new television. Because sometimes I might go to the store with the faulty one to select a new TV myself. Yours faithfully,
Neminda
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Namenda
Harankahawa

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