some people believe that university should work part time job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, working part-

time

jobs while studying has become a necessity for many students.

Although

, some people argued that a part-

time

job may harm studies. In

this

essay, I would like to discuss the pros and cons to students taking up part-

time

jobs during their studying. The goo

d advant

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The best

age is about working part-

time

during high school, college and university are not only earn extra pocket money to pay daily expense

but

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expense, but

also

it is a crucial opportunity which you can have hand-on

exp

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hands

erience and gain working

skills

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work

day by day that to assist students for the real working world.

Besides

, students will be excel at multitasking as the found the

time

to work and study simultaneously.

For instance

, if students who are interna

tional and job seeker , they

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international and job seekers

the international and job seeker

w

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,

ill be given some experic

ene at wor

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

king environment

such

as culture,lifest

y

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,

le, language and so on from foreign

country

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foreign countries

a foreign country

Moreover

, a part-

time

job is rewarding to help students be responsible for their schedules, finance, and duties. Every work environment brings students to meet new people. That's why students who can gain independence, even getting more high powered in their career. One of the ineffective sides, working part-

time

while studying is certainly lack of

time

. Students indeed

reject school

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have indeed rejected

activities and their colleagues because there is no

time

to have fun so

studen

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fun, so

ts will be dead-tired to put offload on their shoulders. It's even students are down and out in terms of exams and ruin their career prospects. Additio

naly, one m

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Additionally

ore negative thing is that students only see having wages without degrees is the best way more than focus on studying.

Although

, a variety

of peo

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variation

ple's example

who are su

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example, who

ccess

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successful

rise. It's better in case of special

ty.

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Specialty

After a discussion of both sides. It can be concluded that students need to be confident in your

time

management and organized skills to ensure their education. It will

also

depend on individual responsibility for working part-

time

while studying.