The breakthrough in medical science are by for the most significant advances in the world society over the last centuries.

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An amazing development
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has taken
place in the world.
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has brought tremendous progress. The medical
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have been
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advanced
in the world.
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provides
many amenities among the human beings and they dwell the easier and enjoy the
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. It has revolutionized almost every field of activity. To embark on,
science
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has
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in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
revolutionized every expect of human
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. It is bestowed in
numberable
that can be counted
numerable
blessing on mankind computer
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the one of the best
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inventions
invention
in human
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because, individuals
life
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more easier and enjoyable. They attain numerous
things including
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things, including
car, phone, planes so on. The human
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more comfortable
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arrival that has been awaited (especially of something momentous)
advent
modern technology. In the past, masses did not enjoy the
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types of things. Now, In many
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technology
assiting
give help or assistance; be of service
assisting
or totally replacing human labour.
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, medical
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provide
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provides
best doctor and they do the
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quickest
quicker
treatment of all diseases. The
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two centuries people face problem. They could not obtain better treatment and the died due to dangerous diseases
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as, cancer,
small pox
a highly contagious viral disease characterized by fever and weakness and skin eruption with pustules that form scabs that slough off leaving scars
smallpox
fever
so on
in the near future
soon
. Now, individuals provide
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the best care
the best cure
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the best
hospital and they gain medicine for any diseases. Many
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hospital
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laboratories
opened in the world and
cities so
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cities, so
, folks can easily go there and take the medicine. Over the year we have
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noticed the medical
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has advance numbers of things. People
can not
can not
cannot
face any problem and the make
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convenient.
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and modern technology have brought tremendous changes in our
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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